so far as she knows and remembers and intends, she's never leaving Narnia (other than this), but at least there was an end to the war]
If it's honest about your feelings, then it's not too sad. Honesty is essential in poetry. Unless it's to tell your lady fair that her feet have beautiful arches. That can be left alone.
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so far as she knows and remembers and intends, she's never leaving Narnia (other than this), but at least there was an end to the war]
If it's honest about your feelings, then it's not too sad. Honesty is essential in poetry. Unless it's to tell your lady fair that her feet have beautiful arches. That can be left alone.
[she's looking at you, legions of suitors]
May I read the happier one?