[ She continued to listen, bouncing one foot on top of her knee as she continued to feign enraptured interest. It wasn't a bad story over all, especially when she thought about the fact that it might not even be a story at all. Where he was from it seemed like it was probably actually the truth. ]

Crazy to think it's true. [ Not crazy enough for her to not buy, not when they were both in this place, but still crazy. ]

Missing a few standard elements but it wasn't bad. Could've used some romance and some comedic relief.